5_ChuW

November 14, 2010

Dear Mr. Worthy:

Breathing in poison wandering in the sky. Scorching heat causing red flags to wave everywhere. These are just some of the major acts air pollution is causing globally. I am writing this letter to you today because I believe we can greatly reduce these negatives by considering some changes to our daily habits. But how willing you are to help is based on how you'll answer this question: what kind of life in health do you wish for your love ones or if there is any life to protect anymore?

Millions of lives are affected every day to every year by air pollution. People either get sick by breathng in the toxic or die prematurely. There are many causes of air pollution and none of them are pleasing to read or listen to. But those facts don't need to be facts if we do some of the following things listed below:

1. Drive less. If there is absolutely no reason to drive then don't or if where you need to be walking can get you there then walk.

2. Recyle your recyclables. Any plastic, aluminum, and glass that you have please recycle them and don't put them with other disaposables.

3. Smokers should smoke less or attempt to quit. Studies have shown smoking to cause more pollutants than a diesel car.

Social issues such as healthcare, traffic gridlocks, food poisoning, etc. can all be reduced if we reduce our conscious or unconscious contributions to air pollution. The people here at World Health Organization wants to make your life and everybody elses' lives better in terms of health.

We all want to live our lives free of fears and complications, so please help us by doing your part in eliminating air pollution. If you drive your car more than you have to then drive it less. If you see a glass bottle sitting on a bench or sidewalk, please recycle it. If you smoke then consider quitting. A little change to your lifestyle could mean the biggest to the world. Thank you for your time and I hope to hear from you soon.

Best regards,

Wilson Chu student **80526226**
 * the introduction could have been better, the first sentence is a bit odd.**

I would have personalized the letter a little more. The letter sounds to general like a massive advertising letter.

good conclusion, that was my favorite part

Good introduction because it provides some inside story and thought provoking statements before it asks the reader to act but a bit confusing in the wording.

Body could use a little more inside depth. It doesn't really build on the case of the introduction but it does tell what users could do to prevent it from happening. Add sources of where you got your facts cases from.

Conclusion does help persuade me in acting because it's easy to do and most people will look out for the environments best interest.

Overall the letter did persuade me because I want to look at the for the best interest of the environment also and the things listed are easy to do in order to help so I am convinced.

Graded by: Student #4